Above is the feedback sheets that we got from our pitch overall the feedback I feel was positive, although every group did write in the amber section there was nothing totally wrong with what we did, some said that we needed to focus more on what are target audience actually is and we have since slightly adjusted who we thought would be the target audience. Some also said that we needed to focus on how we were going to make the video flow so that it actually made sense, something else that we have also considered. However nobody wrote anything in the red section so a least they understood at least simply the idea that we had.
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